Castles In The Sky [Free320]

[WeaponsOfExpression]

Here is my most recent project, please enjoy. Feedback would be great, ill return some too if you got a track up here
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[eb4evr]

Here goes:

:20 - I dig the percussion. Great groove, the reverse cymbal is a nice touch, and the lower bass hit.

the whole intro gets to be a little monotonous though, feels like a repeated 4 bar phrase. if there was variation, it was SUPER subtle.

the lead synth that came in 1:37 was a little grating, but i dig the idea you're going for with the drop

great little breakdown at 2:20, i just feel like there needs to be something leading up to that lead machinegun/chainsaw synth, its SO sudden

good track though, i'll follow your soundcloud (follow me back!)

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=189895

[WeaponsOfExpression]

thanks for the input man, im going to try to make that long intro a little more entertaining. appreciate it. & will do sir.

[PR1NCE]

I Personally thought the intro was interesting and catchy... i don't see anything wrong with it AT ALL !!! But maybe something to spice it up wont hurt as well. Your snare could use some reverb and a bit more punch. At the very first drop that bassline you got there is way to Loud and maybe too high pitched,

Doesn't suit the track, cuz you got this high pitched bassline then a low subb bassline.. idk just me... id get rid of it...

Other than that... keep at it..

[WeaponsOfExpression]

thanks man, il probably try to add something minor to the intro to give it a little more spice. & i totally agree, while trying to make this track, the problem has been getting that squeal bass to chillout.