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Got a couple of new tunes up in soundcloud, feedback is greatly appreciated and given in return as usual.



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Hi!

First one is missing some bass and maybe some wobble, and is quite long, not enough variation.
Second is 8-bit, I personally like that, I think that Reflu would enjoy this one! Thouh also missing some variations, for example a break at 1:48 would be nice, but much more variations, even only with more hit hat at some moments, or a solo of drum "tamtam", and you miss also a sub. But i like the idea of this one personally! Lyrics is good by the way!

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cheers mate!

the first one does have sub but the mixdown cut the lows a bit off. hope it's still a bit audible? anyway it's good to have constructive feedback, thanks for the suggestions!
as for your track, it's brilliant! kinda reminds me of old caspa & rusko collabos, lush and lovely. i downloaded it and will definately put it in my next mix!

by the way, who/what is reflu and could he listen to my track?

Here is reflux profile.
http://www.dubstepforum.com/memberlist. ... le&u=65576
For instance his track This Will Kill That was good in this style!

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Liking both of them mate, the first one is probably my favorite cos its a bit different. Good work!

The first tune is missing some stronger sub, i´m all after the second one, though, that one´s pretty sick

vyvyan wrote:Hi!

First one is missing some bass and maybe some wobble, and is quite long, not enough variation.

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the first one don't need a wobble at all, i like it how it is now it just need more sub

cheers! johney: great stuff, somewhat familiar sound, at times reminds me of coki, maybe it's the drums? hi hats? dunno. cool!

i'll bump this up one more time. and will emphasis the sub on the first track. i thought it was a bit vague but gotta avoid peaking and keep the mix clean

do you mean my tunes?

and yeah, do it, it would be nice to hear that with some proper weight

well here's your chance! i uploaded a weightier mixdown of the tune. the link is the same. cheers!

and i do mean your tunes!

+1 Add more sub, but I still like it, I think its best described as "power chill"

Check me out and gimme some love, not sure its really up your alley but any feedback is appreciated.

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f ... 0#p2316240

Monstro wrote:+1 Add more sub, but I still like it, I think its best described as "power chill"

Check me out and gimme some love, not sure its really up your alley but any feedback is appreciated.

http://dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f ... 0#p2316240

even more sub? i already put as much as there can be without screwing up the mix and it resulting in peaking and nasty crackling. but i might not be doing it right, who knows!

thanks anayway. power chill? good call. could you elaborate on that?

on your tune, i like it, good production value. i'm not a big fan of those jump up, edgy distorted wobbles but the arpeggio's and the chord progression are very very cool. well done. nice track, could use a little bit more punch, maybe that'll come if it was mastered? who knows, i'm an amateur

sounds a lot better maybe you could add some variation to hats? like filtering or a little pitch change at the end of every say 8 or 16 bars?

johney wrote:sounds a lot better maybe you could add some variation to hats? like filtering or a little pitch change at the end of every say 8 or 16 bars?

noted. i don't think i'll make any changes on the track though, i'll leave it like that. but you got a point, my tunes always lack variation as i tend to try to finish them fast and get them online. i'm not at all into honing tunes into perfection. so cheers. i'll hit you up with the download links you requested in the pm.

probably some of best stuff i've caught in the dubs section in some time. this is what makes me come back after 3 years. i'll be looking for more, and hit me with these when you're ready with the links too please.

bigbasha wrote:probably some of best stuff i've caught in the dubs section in some time. this is what makes me come back after 3 years. i'll be looking for more, and hit me with these when you're ready with the links too please.

many thanks for your kind words. i'll pm you with the links!

vyvyan wrote:Hi!

First one is missing some bass and maybe some wobble

Lolwut... First one got my sub all fired up man

Read all comments, you'd have maybe understood that there was not enough, before he makes a new version with more sub lol

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