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OGP - Shimma

Post by OGP » Sun Apr 10, 2011 1:55 pm

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Re: OGP - Shimma

Post by OGP » Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:43 pm

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Re: OGP - Shimma

Post by SGN » Tue Apr 12, 2011 9:05 pm

Okay first off, I definitely have to say that this is interesting. When the song started off I was expecting some dark tribal Jack Sparrow like tune but then the synth came in. Really like the sound of the claps as well as what sounds like vinyl crackle...minor things that I think deserve mention. Lovely synths...they sound kind of playful but never silly. My one advice to you would be to work on the arrangement. The percussion...the rides/cymbals in particular get sort of oppressive/repetitive after a while. I'd suggest automating them out before you drop the bass in for the first time. That'll also give your song more momentum when you bring them back further along.

Other than that, I enjoyed this. :corndance:
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Re: OGP - Shimma

Post by daddy mchectic » Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:02 pm

Cool positive vibe, very different. Nicely produced. Good job. Moar sub please.
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Re: OGP - Shimma

Post by Monstro » Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:57 am

The rides are like a relentless assault that my eardrums can no pull away from, and MOOOOOORE SUBBBBB. But I do like it other than those minor things.

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Re: OGP - Shimma

Post by TheSoup » Wed Apr 13, 2011 5:16 am

i really like this one, such nice chill vibes. but, i would shorten the intro to about half the length, and maybe cut the rides/soft hihats out a little before the actual drop. otherwise, i really like it, you have some great atmosphere here. also bring the bass up, its a really interesting part but just needs to be a little louder. nice one man
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