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So, I've been lurking this forum for quite a while and finally uploaded something worth listening to IMO. At least I think it is, I could be completely wrong. Hey either way I'm just looking for feedback. If it sucks go ahead and tear me apart, however please try to be productive and tell me what you hate about it. And if you like it tell me how it could be better lol. Thanks guys.
Description:
First real Dubstep song I've been working on. I grew up listening to metal & hard rock, so this wonderful electronic scene I've been introduced to has been quite the challenge. I don't really understand song arrangements and form so if you have any input on how I can make this song better, please don't hesitate.

I'm using logic, and automating filters on that is simply over my head right now. I'm considering bouncing to A. Live 8 to work on filtering parts maybe.

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edit: I'm using NI's Massive, Sylenth1, & Omnisphere w/ Waves at my schools computer
if you guys like it I'll fix it up and make it downloadable for free @ 320

some cool melodys man im just startin out producing dubstep and im comin from like metal to and i stil make hip hop beats u just gota keep at it mayn use wat u no draw infulences from wat u like and wat sounds your tryn to get im not really in any position to give advice lol cus im just startin to kinda but if it was me id make the kicks more punchy and louder but its always up to u duude keep at it tho

Thanks man. hey you got some really cool melodies yourself. Andd your stuff is super chill i'm diggin it.

thanks man ! im still workin on some new stuff this day