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PaddyG
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by PaddyG » Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:24 am
http://soundcloud.com/reindeer/sumfin-innit
With the feedback I got from my last track I decided to whip up another tune.
This is my second dubstep track so criticism is welcome.
Just try not to be too hard
Soundcloud
I tried to incorporate more progression and beefier drums in this one, tryin to learn synthesis sylenth1 and massive.
Hope you like er' I'll try to keep em coming your way.
Peace
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OGP
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by OGP » Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:33 am
A really nice rhythm which is let down slightly by a very generic sounding snare and hat. Work on the structure a bit as well, I think the sections go on for too long without variation. It's really got a groove to it though, definitely worth working on and refining
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PaddyG
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by PaddyG » Wed Apr 13, 2011 3:55 pm
Thanks mate, I'm probably gonna let this one sit for a bit, I want to try to make some new and different tracks. Maybe some day I'll clean this one up!
I'll try to work on layering hats and snares, I was focused on the bass drum this time around! Defo going to work on structure, as well as adding more variety within the rhythms and melodies. I'm still not impressed with my synth sounds yet, I really want to mix them up a bit more.
Thanks for the feedback, it'll definitely be put to good use!
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