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This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Fri Apr 22, 2011 4:51 am

So if you actually did check this one out then lemme know what you think!

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Illdillusions » Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:48 am

nice drop @ 2:04 could have been at 1:04?
:)

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Fri Apr 22, 2011 7:02 am

Illdillusions wrote:nice drop @ 2:04 could have been at 1:04?
:)
Thanks!!

And yeah I tend to have long intros for some reason. Its kind of annoying. I guess its just where my two dubstep tastes clash.

I have the slow, progressive build of a track like Digital Mystikz, but with the synths and drops of more brosteppy and melodic/banger-y tunes.

Although I cannot compare myself to either of the two sides of the genre, I'm nowhere near that level of production/sound design. :dunce:

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Illdillusions » Fri Apr 22, 2011 7:07 am

I hear you lol
sometimes genre blending in ones head is blending other things.
but yeah :)

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:22 am

Illdillusions wrote:I hear you lol
sometimes genre blending in ones head is blending other things.
but yeah :)
Haha yeah exactly ;-)

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Radiant » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:52 am

Gave it a listen and I think the setup of your track is nice!

One thing that I did notice when listening through the track is that it feels a bit repetitive, and it could do with some switchups to maintain the attention and the energy, maybe shortening it as well, 7.40 is unusually long!

I've got the same dilemma with intros as well, my main inspiration is classical music, and things tend to have a very long buildup there. I'm also still trying to find the best way to bridge that gap and I think you did okay, just think that switchups/more variation would maintain a stronger flow.

Might be just me that experiences it like that though! Hopefully my feedback is useful to you somehow.

If you could, leave me some feedback on my track as well, I'd appreciate it!
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=195135
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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Fri Apr 22, 2011 9:13 am

Radiant wrote:Gave it a listen and I think the setup of your track is nice!

One thing that I did notice when listening through the track is that it feels a bit repetitive, and it could do with some switchups to maintain the attention and the energy, maybe shortening it as well, 7.40 is unusually long!

I've got the same dilemma with intros as well, my main inspiration is classical music, and things tend to have a very long buildup there. I'm also still trying to find the best way to bridge that gap and I think you did okay, just think that switchups/more variation would maintain a stronger flow.

Might be just me that experiences it like that though! Hopefully my feedback is useful to you somehow.

If you could, leave me some feedback on my track as well, I'd appreciate it!
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=195135
I totally feel ya! I've been listening to this since I exported it, and I find myself almost getting bored.
I want to throw in another subtle melody or something like that to keep it thick but similar.

Gonna check out your tune right now!

Thanks for the listen!! :D

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by vyvyan » Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:28 am

Hi!

Not too much my thing, but people can like that... though it is definetely too long! Trying to reduce evey part at half would be a good idea.
The part at 3:26 goes very well, you should use it more often, like put it earlier and use it at lease twice (with little variations also)

Nice work though.

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:24 pm

vyvyan wrote:Hi!

Not too much my thing, but people can like that... though it is definetely too long! Trying to reduce evey part at half would be a good idea.
The part at 3:26 goes very well, you should use it more often, like put it earlier and use it at lease twice (with little variations also)

Nice work though.

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Thanks!!

And yeah its way too long haha, I should've put in the post that its not really 100% finished :?

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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by kcearl » Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:00 pm

I listened..I liked

I dont really mind the long intro or the repetitiveness, my tracks rarely get past 4 mins nowadays so over 7 is a long space to fill
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Re: This probably won't get listened to, but fuck it!

Post by Atac » Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:21 pm

kcearl wrote:I listened..I liked

I dont really mind the long intro or the repetitiveness, my tracks rarely get past 4 mins nowadays so over 7 is a long space to fill
Cool cool thanks for the feedback!

And yeah I used to be a huge trance head so I'm used to 7 or 8 minute songs. I like the idea of gradual symphonic progression throughout a song but it's hard to do that with dubstep haha

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