First completed song now online, comments and critiques! :D

[Retika]

Just uploaded my first completed song online. Tell me what you think, this song was actually something I worked on over a year ago but I opened up the project in FL Studio and refined a couple sounds and called it a day lol..I'm still a noob and learning my way around music production, I'll be releasing more songs soon (and definitely better ones). Thanks for checking

http://soundcloud.com/retika/zone-ender

[LkBeatz]

The sound design and idea is cool, but the arrangement and mix need work imo. Anytime in sound cloud if your waveform comes out completely at the top and all the way across your track, you know the mix needs work and doesnt leave any room for the master engineer to clean it up at the very end when you get to the point of releasing tracks. But keep learning and keep making music hands on is the best way to learn. Check my latest out. Stay up. DJ LK

[sub-life]

yea man u got some cool ideas i like the panning parts to pretty cool but yea your track might be clipping maybe cus of the loudness but other than that keep it up man sounds good check out my tunes im kinda new to peace