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you have a filthy style, thats cool. try to bring your bass out more, like make it stand out. Also your hat hits are a little repetitive imo, but its a cool track man.

WeaponsOfExpression wrote:you have a filthy style, thats cool. try to bring your bass out more, like make it stand out. Also your hat hits are a little repetitive imo, but its a cool track man.

first of all thanks for the feedback i realy appriciate and i am gonna try to work on the bass problem

i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

Bangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

did you just personify your track and talk to it? lol

but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!

kolstrom wrote:

Bangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

did you just personify your track and talk to it? lol

but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!

no i was talking about yours not mine

Bangley wrote:

kolstrom wrote:

Bangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

did you just personify your track and talk to it? lol

but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!

no i was talking about yours not mine

thank for the feedback really appreciate it

no problem. i look forward to hearing more stuff from you

kolstrom wrote:

Bangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

did you just personify your track and talk to it? lol

but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!

I lol'd!

My advice on this would be to get a more defined melody structure, at least at some parts. To me this is just a series of fx with a nice beat, a rather cool series of fx tho. Some parts are groovy, but overall the samples and "not-melody-sounds" are taking up to much space in my opinion. keep it up!:)

Gonzzzor wrote:

kolstrom wrote:

Bangley wrote:i like you song especialy the part and the samples keep it up

did you just personify your track and talk to it? lol

but anyway, its filthy and you got some really good ideas going there. the samples are well chosen. get that hi-hat out of my right ear though, pan that puppy more to the center or something. also we kind of lose the kick drum and snare amidst all the stuff going on when the track drops. try using a sidechained compressor on some of the audio so that it dips back when the kick comes in. make your snare louder too. keep it up!

I lol'd!

My advice on this would be to get a more defined melody structure, at least at some parts. To me this is just a series of fx with a nice beat, a rather cool series of fx tho. Some parts are groovy, but overall the samples and "not-melody-sounds" are taking up to much space in my opinion. keep it up!:)

this was my first song i ever made but thanks for the feedback i am going to pay more attention on my next song

It's not a bad first try at all! Sorry if i sounded a bit harsh. I'm just trying to give you some constructive advice I'm no pro myself, just telling you what i think would sound better to me!