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NEW TUNE UP, FEEDBACK NEEDED
Posted: Tue May 08, 2007 5:44 pm
by ozols man
yeh i got a new tune up called THE EDGE, tell me what y'all think and how i can improve it, easy nooow
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www.myspace.com/sonicpressure
Posted: Wed May 09, 2007 5:12 am
by krio
imo, tune sounds pretty cool.
Although i personally think the bassline gets tiresome
Other than that, nice work.
note: i'm an amateur so don't take anything serious from me
Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 6:24 pm
by clone a side
big up!
of to add u onmyspace now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:40 pm
by ozols man
haha cheers for the feedback lads...
Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:52 pm
by hopper
not so keen on the edge but boogie man sounds wicked!
Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 2:05 am
by kee
hopper wrote:not so keen on the edge but boogie man sounds wicked!
agreed. big ups!
Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 2:16 am
by doomstep
The Edge is heavy until 1min9ish - not really feeling the pianos, but from 45secs t 1min9 is ill.
Boogieman is good as well - feelin yr style ozols man
Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:34 am
by flippo
Piano is out of key, but might be what you are going for however, not sure?
Bassline has more stereo presence than the drums, something I find a bit jaring. Could be heavier too. I'd run a very clean sub underneath it to give it some weight if you wanted that.
Drums need to but through the mix a bit more for my tastes. I like your kick, but I think if you layered the snare a bit and brought it out in the mix it would carry the rythem a bit more.
shakers are cool.
Original sound, which is always good
Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 8:57 am
by horse
edge:
boost up that snare and like flippo said, drop a nice clean sub right underneath everything
loving the offkey pianos tho
boogieman:
really reminds me of "jezebel" by dizzee rascal (thats good btw)
the vocal sample on the drop is excellent, you should bring that out a bit more.
and that rising/falling synth line need bringing forward a bit.
good drumwork on this
if you plan to fix them up a touch i really wouldnt mind some 320s on these. hit me up!