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Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 1:49 am
by Iorek
Something I've been working on like to hear what you all think :)
P.S. I will return feedback :)

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Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 2:17 am
by MedikProductions
my thoughts - that main wobble you're using loses it's effect since you've spaced it out so much. unless you're going for more of a minimalistic approach i think you should keep it center to make it heavier. also one trick i like to do is duplicate your wobble and match the pitch an octave higher or lower and maybe change the effect. the wobble at the drop in my sig at 1:29 is actually 4 different wobbles (all the same) layered with different effects at 2 different octaves. just a couple idearz http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=199663 lemme know what you think bout mine ;]

Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 6:16 am
by deranger
Intro is fairly weird and scary. It's a bit off putting. The intro goes on too long. The drop is strange. It seems disconnected from the intro. The drums are weak. The wobble is ok. The feel is kinda confusing. It's sorta lounge, but the bass somewhat aggressive. I hear what you were trying to do, it just didn't quite work out. Overall the production needs some work. The drums could be worked on for sure. Also, the mix is a little off. The different elements aren't blending, they seen to be fighting each other for my attention.

Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 1:49 pm
by Iorek
Thanks for everyones input

Re: Iorek - Akira Tribute [dubstep]

Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 2:00 pm
by ARTFX
Yeahh mate work out those drums a bit more, also some more processing on the bass wouldn't do it any bad I think.