Psyberia - Up and coming, bassed up dub

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psyberiatunes
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Psyberia - Up and coming, bassed up dub

Post by psyberiatunes » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:03 pm

First time poster. Have a few dubstep tunes, would appreciate feedback on them as well as purchase them if you feel so inclined to do so :)

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Re: Psyberia - Up and coming, bassed up dub

Post by anotherday » Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:26 pm

1st tune - the dance vocals that are in there are really hard to here, and your drums get a lot quieter after the 1st drop. Some of your wobbles that come in (0:58) are waaay too loud in the mix and offbeat. did you sample a complete riff from another song cuz I can hear 2 sets of kicks and snares in there too...

2nd tune - Sounds kinda like too many different ideas and riffs to have a cohesive song

Overall I think you need to smooth out your levels throughout your tunes and try to have more repetitive parts to gel your mix together. Keep reading resources on here, especially stuff about gain structure and compression as I think that would help you out the most.

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Re: Psyberia - Up and coming, bassed up dub

Post by psyberiatunes » Sun Jun 05, 2011 2:18 pm

Thanks man I appreciate your input, really. Its really hard to make good dubstep when you don't yet have a MIDI Controller or a mixer or tables. I have no equipment I just make the tunes in Renoise. No I didn't sample a whole riff I just really liked the bass line and the rise and drop of one song. Made my own bass hook. Thanks again mate

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