My second track in Ableton. FEEDBACK for FEEDBACK!

[SunOverSaturn]

This is my second track in Ableton. Only been working on it for about half a day now so it's not perfect. The mastering could use some work, but I'm honestly not very good at mastering yet. So any tips, pointers, feedback, whatever, would be great!
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If you have some stuff you want feedback on I'm probably the most active person on this board lately, so just hit me up. Always good to get feedback from other artists.

[RoyceRokit]

Sounds pretty good although it does seem to get a tiny bit repetitive in the middle but that could just be me Otherwise really good for your second track. If you could check out mine, http://www.youtube.com/user/RoyceRokit?feature=mhsn I have two, The remix is the most recent and I also use Ableton

Thanks

[Atom-13]

Sounds good man! Keep working at it, maybe add a little variation to the bass line with some other basses and what-not. I've just started with ableton as well. There is a lot to learn, but it just gets better and better!

Cheers!

Here's a link to something I'd like feedback on

http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=202430

[SunOverSaturn]

@Atom-13: I couldn't get your stuff to play?

[Atom-13]

Here it is

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[IOMac]

the start reminds me off deadmaus and the middle reminds me a bit of borgore, i think the drums are a bit dry, try and work on their groove and ambience
What synths are you using btw?

Here's my new one, please be as brutal on the production as possible

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[SunOverSaturn]

Yours sounds great man. I really don't think I would make any changes. Put that shit up for download lol. And also, I'm new to production. Could you maybe give me a few tips on improving my drums? Like, what do you think I should do to them?

[SunOverSaturn]

Oh and I'm using Sylenth/Ableton for synths btw.

[IOMac]

I've just started using sylenth. Really just listen to what the pros do in with their grooves. i'd have more hi-hats and fx going on. How many reverbs are you using on the drums?

[SunOverSaturn]

Actually no reverb on those lol. I guess it kinda slipped my mind...

[smoores]

Good track! I liked the intro, but i feel like it goes into the drop too smoothly, if that makes any sense. I feel like it needs more of a buildup, maybe throw in some drums and pick up the tempo right before the drop. And I prefer a more dirty bass, but keep up the good work!
If you could give me some feedback on mine that'd be great http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=202439