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cheers! thanks for the time & any feedback. will return if you want fb.
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Trippin it but some sounds crossover too much nice job anyways

Thanks man. Right now, i feel like I have some good pieces to work with, just need to work it into a tune.

Can't help but feel there's a few too many different ideas going on here, makes the track feel a bit disjointed. There's definitely some good ideas on there own (the drum & bass section could work as its own track with a bit of work) but a lot just seems unnecessary to me. The timing in the build up seems a bit off as well. Have a go a stripping the track back down a little bit, get rid of any parts you feel aren't working towards the overall feel of the track. Keep at it man check out my tracks if you get the chance.