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[magu]

FEEDBACK WOULD BE AWESOME!

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AND HERE ARE OTHR TUNES FOR U TO CHECK OUT!
AS I SAID FEEDBACK WOULD BE GREAT AND SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISCM TOO!
CHEERS!

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AND HERE A RECENT TUNE I MADE! FREE 320 !

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HOPE U ENJOY MY TUNES AND THANK U FOR LISTENING AND COMMENTING!

[TerraRiddim]

First off, I would change the snare, the melody and atmosphere of the song brings smooth but somewhat tense deep vibes that pull in your concentration, and the breakbeat/brostep smash snare is a bit harsh and abrasive and detracts from the rest of the tune. Throwing a verb on a big snare that isn't as much smashy and has more of a crack to it, compressed but not distorted or noisy. I lost the hi hats when the bass came in so that could be because of what I'm listening to this through (I'm mobile right now not at home) but if they're getting swallowed up by the rest of the tune, hi pass them or eq a bit differently so they're brighter and boost the compression or an adaptive limiter a bit for added volume (hopefully you have some headroom so it doesn't start clipping, that is a bit of a problem on a few of my tunes.) The bassline sounds decent, pretty standard dubstep wobble to be honest, I think the track would have a more cohesive feeling and pull you in more if you dropped the full on wobble for maybe some whole and half note sub bass stabs (automate the cutoff a bit so it drags up) and then every 2, 4 or 8 bars throw in a few hobbles a half step up or down and I feel like the rest of the tune wont feel like a background for that bass, it would move and catch you a bit nicer. Just some thoughts while I'm out and about hopefully they're helpful, if not my bad Big ups bruv, ez
- Terra

[magu]

First off, I would change the snare, the melody and atmosphere of the song brings smooth but somewhat tense deep vibes that pull in your concentration, and the breakbeat/brostep smash snare is a bit harsh and abrasive and detracts from the rest of the tune. Throwing a verb on a big snare that isn't as much smashy and has more of a crack to it, compressed but not distorted or noisy. I lost the hi hats when the bass came in so that could be because of what I'm listening to this through (I'm mobile right now not at home) but if they're getting swallowed up by the rest of the tune, hi pass them or eq a bit differently so they're brighter and boost the compression or an adaptive limiter a bit for added volume (hopefully you have some headroom so it doesn't start clipping, that is a bit of a problem on a few of my tunes.) The bassline sounds decent, pretty standard dubstep wobble to be honest, I think the track would have a more cohesive feeling and pull you in more if you dropped the full on wobble for maybe some whole and half note sub bass stabs (automate the cutoff a bit so it drags up) and then every 2, 4 or 8 bars throw in a few hobbles a half step up or down and I feel like the rest of the tune wont feel like a background for that bass, it would move and catch you a bit nicer. Just some thoughts while I'm out and about hopefully they're helpful, if not my bad Big ups bruv, ez
- Terra

thanks mate appreciate the time u took to tell me this! i will tryout some stuffs and get back with u, although i like the break snare cuz a bit further in the song i've got some crazy shit!

[SignalRecon]

Its not sounding bad, your snare does seem to have a smaller room than your tune. The only thing im concerned about is what looks to me like 16-24bar intro 8bar drop 16-24bar bridge to another 8bar drop.

Honestly you sound like you understand how to use your software and can make sounds and put them where you need them to be but you are where most of us here are stuck (myself included)... keeping things interesting for 3.5minutes lol.

[magu]

Its not sounding bad, your snare does seem to have a smaller room than your tune. The only thing im concerned about is what looks to me like 16-24bar intro 8bar drop 16-24bar bridge to another 8bar drop.

Honestly you sound like you understand how to use your software and can make sounds and put them where you need them to be but you are where most of us here are stuck (myself included)... keeping things interesting for 3.5minutes lol.

hahahaha well thanks for the comment mate! i shall work a b it those snares to get a better groove on them! thanks a lot will have to work the srtucture but prsonally i like the suspense, i recon a have to get bit more floty on the 8 bar of the drop so will gladly take help with ideas mate thanks!

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magu!