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So, I love the way the song is written. I really like the harmony and the structure.
What you are lacking here is the proper sound design to makes your parts sound bigger and fuller, and the mixing stage that makes it all sit together well.
I honestly think this is a spectacular idea. But its only an idea. Try to work on experimenting with different patches, vsts etc.

I agree, good melody etc, but the sound is just a bit 'thin' try to have a look around youtube and tips they can help out on the bass sounds. Good job though man