Work in progress - Feedback/suggestions

[dubbyconqueror]

I've been messing around with FL for a little while now, this is the first thing I've more or less finished (though I need to come up with an intro segment and just generally mix the whole thing). I'd appreciate if I could get some feedback and maybe suggestions from you more experienced users, especially in terms of the mix and the production. Thanks in advance. Oh, and excuse the abrupt beginning, I need to work out an intro section.
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Keep in mind I am really new to this and still really learning how to use FL properly.

[dubbyconqueror]

Anyone? I could really use some feedback on this, and some advice, because the production especially is a disaster.

[Noddism]

I would start with tuning the reverb on your snare down a bit. That and read up on layering your bass sounds. Really you would benefit a lot from learning some basics about mixing, feels like there is a lot going on. Many voices competing for the same frequencies.

[dubbyconqueror]

Yeah, I'm thinking of just redoing this entirely in a new project, how I have it now's pretty hard to fix how badly its mixed. Yeah, and I'm thinking of probably turning the delay on the snare down, and/or only having it echo every other time or something. Mostly, though, I really need to learn some stuff about mixing and compression as it gets pretty muddy and uneven throughout. Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.