Free 4 Track EP....

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djscaife
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Free 4 Track EP....

Post by djscaife » Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:00 pm

let me no what you think.....

http://www.mediafire.com/?yu4r1njzkghqbks
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truekimbo2
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Re: Free 4 Track EP....

Post by truekimbo2 » Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:17 pm

link doesn't work. Not clicked or copy pasted.

djscaife
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Re: Free 4 Track EP....

Post by djscaife » Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:25 am

should be soted now

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truekimbo2
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Re: Free 4 Track EP....

Post by truekimbo2 » Tue Aug 02, 2011 7:28 pm

okay i checked them out. I don't think this album is ready for releasing. Your wobbles are generic and simplistic. The drums are close to good but not quite.

I'm sorry if i'm wrong, but there are alot of little details in your songs that make it sound like someone who hasn't been producing long. I'd guess like 8 months or so?

Anyhow, i think your track "blood" was your best one and i'm going to give you helpful feedback on that one.

overall, track has a bunch of potential. The beat is pretty okay. One thing that stands out is your hats are waaaaay too bright. Do you have a short or small space reverb on them? you need to heavily shave that away, and/or turn them down in the mix and/or the pitch needs to be finely adjusted and/or they need to be re-eqed.

I like the starting melody and synth alot. i feel the hype.
the little vocal sample and the screamy type synth work well together. If you want to keep using that vocal sample throughought the song though you're gonna need to vary it up.
Your bassline i don't quite like the lfo on it but that could be personal preference. Maybe some modulation on the wobble itself. Its a cool sound. I like shorter and more statacco one alot.
For the main bassline i think what could really pull it together is some sub booms timed at the same time as some of the notes. You kind of do this at one part. I like it.

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Re: Free 4 Track EP....

Post by MedikProductions » Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:08 pm

truekimbo2 wrote:okay i checked them out. I don't think this album is ready for releasing. Your wobbles are generic and simplistic. The drums are close to good but not quite.

I'm sorry if i'm wrong, but there are alot of little details in your songs that make it sound like someone who hasn't been producing long. I'd guess like 8 months or so?

Anyhow, i think your track "blood" was your best one and i'm going to give you helpful feedback on that one.
i've been producing nearly 7 months :P

honestly i agree blood is the best one. i like the drum quality, some neat sounds and smart ideas but some things are like oddly off. i recommend freezing and flattening all tracks and working with the waveforms to make sure everything's on point.

also your synths lack a bit of power. if you're using massive try upping the unison voices from 1/16 to like 4/16 or something. there's lots of tricks to getting thicker sound (the tubes, dropping an oscillator a couple octaves, eq everything, make sure decay level in envelope is all the way up, etc)

good luck with the releases and stuff
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djscaife
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Re: Free 4 Track EP....

Post by djscaife » Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:30 pm

:) thanks for the feedback...

like your sed these are my 1st ever 4 dubstep tracks av made, i been produceing abit but am new to massive and a few other plugins,
the reason i put them up here is to get this freeback i can tell myself there no were near the stuff whats out there but am guna take in what your both sed
n have a play around hopyfully al get some were..

thanks again!!!

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