Let me know what you think of my work in progress :)

[adambrown666]

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Any feedback is appreciated

[kaiori breathe]

Sounding good so far man. Track feels like it's lacking high end on the drums and some of the bass synths, sounds a little damp, but other than that the production is pretty spot on I think. Nice flangey sounds on that bass synth, really nice liquidish feel to it. Only thing I'd say is that lead synth sounds a bit too 'nice' in contrast to the rest of the track, I'd personally work on getting a few more gritty layers in there or maybe making the melody a little darker. I'm being ultra picky though, really it's a good track, nice work man.

Oh, and for future reference (not trying to be a douche here) WIPs are meant to go in the production forum in the Works In Progress thread - you'll get a lot more feedback if you post it there, the dubs section is really just for finished tunes.

[BurQ]

Nice work man

[adambrown666]

Sounding good so far man. Track feels like it's lacking high end on the drums and some of the bass synths, sounds a little damp, but other than that the production is pretty spot on I think. Nice flangey sounds on that bass synth, really nice liquidish feel to it. Only thing I'd say is that lead synth sounds a bit too 'nice' in contrast to the rest of the track, I'd personally work on getting a few more gritty layers in there or maybe making the melody a little darker. I'm being ultra picky though, really it's a good track, nice work man.

Oh, and for future reference (not trying to be a douche here) WIPs are meant to go in the production forum in the Works In Progress thread - you'll get a lot more feedback if you post it there, the dubs section is really just for finished tunes.

Cheers for the feedback man, yeah i know exactly where your coming from. The lead doesnt fit in with the rest of the track. But im glad you liked it overall

Ill wack it in there now My bad.