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Let me know what you think of my work in progress :)

Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:38 pm
by adambrown666
Soundcloud

Any feedback is appreciated :)

Re: Let me know what you think of my work in progress :)

Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 3:26 pm
by kaiori breathe
Sounding good so far man. Track feels like it's lacking high end on the drums and some of the bass synths, sounds a little damp, but other than that the production is pretty spot on I think. Nice flangey sounds on that bass synth, really nice liquidish feel to it. Only thing I'd say is that lead synth sounds a bit too 'nice' in contrast to the rest of the track, I'd personally work on getting a few more gritty layers in there or maybe making the melody a little darker. I'm being ultra picky though, really it's a good track, nice work man.

Oh, and for future reference (not trying to be a douche here) WIPs are meant to go in the production forum in the Works In Progress thread - you'll get a lot more feedback if you post it there, the dubs section is really just for finished tunes.

Re: Let me know what you think of my work in progress :)

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 12:25 am
by BurQ
Nice work man

Re: Let me know what you think of my work in progress :)

Posted: Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:32 am
by adambrown666
kaiori breathe wrote:Sounding good so far man. Track feels like it's lacking high end on the drums and some of the bass synths, sounds a little damp, but other than that the production is pretty spot on I think. Nice flangey sounds on that bass synth, really nice liquidish feel to it. Only thing I'd say is that lead synth sounds a bit too 'nice' in contrast to the rest of the track, I'd personally work on getting a few more gritty layers in there or maybe making the melody a little darker. I'm being ultra picky though, really it's a good track, nice work man.

Oh, and for future reference (not trying to be a douche here) WIPs are meant to go in the production forum in the Works In Progress thread - you'll get a lot more feedback if you post it there, the dubs section is really just for finished tunes.
Cheers for the feedback man, yeah i know exactly where your coming from. The lead doesnt fit in with the rest of the track. But im glad you liked it overall :)

Ill wack it in there now :) My bad.