Newly mastered tune ready for feedback

[Betaray]

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Please let me know what you would do to improve my song, or any tips you might happen to have for me in general
Stay on the lookout for more songs by me on my soundcloud page

[paradigm001]

The melody in the begging has a tripplet feel the build is ok. The first bass has a little too much mid low end. Actually all your bassses do. I hear it around 500-800K and it makes things muddy. Good idea though. You also cant hear your kick at all. Bring that up or get a new sample.

[paradigm001]

I listened to the old one and it still sounds the same. The bass is too loud and you have no kick. And those frequencies are muddy.,

[Betaray]

You've got a point there. More like a few actually I think i will be moving on from this song pretty soon and am gonna focus on a newer one. The next one will sound most likely alot better thanks to everyones feedback and will hopefully sound more professional. And next time i remaster something i will make sure to actually fix it :b

[paradigm001]

Well your welcome sometimes its better just to move on. You still have this one under your belt though. It still counts as a tune.
Dont worry.,

[Betaray]

New tune should be out by tomorrow if youre interested. Spoiler alert: Im usin the Song of Healing from Zelda. its turnin out pretty nice so far