Woody D - Daybreak

[Woody D]

How do everyone ,
Ive already posted this in the intros section, so sorry if you have already seen it but im looking for a bit of feedback good and bad. This is my 1st real track. Ive only been producing for a month now on a crappy net book with fl studios. So here we go.
Soundcloud
hope you enjoy it
Chow for now, Woody

[Woody D]

Link fixed, I think. Any feedback would be great.
Cheers

[Be-1ne]

I would suggest going through the threads in this forum and giving other users feedback on their tracks. Works a bit like Karma, give a little and it will come back to you.

[Woody D]

Ahh I see, point taken
cheers bud

[Bad Attitude]

Hey man. Can see that your doing a shed load better than I was after a month lol.
Some nice sounds in there, nice, dark atmosphere too.
Bass doesn't seem harsh enough for the track, just with that great dark feel to the track, it could be harsher, heavier.

[Woody D]

Thanks man, ill work on the bass and try and get it darker. Thanks for the help

[Barbosa1405]

nice work for your 1st month mate, keep on going and you'll get there in the end. beat needs to be tighter, roll off a bit more bass on the kick drum. and make snare stronger.

[Woody D]

Thanks mate