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gerbertgold
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Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by gerbertgold » Wed Aug 24, 2011 10:21 pm

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maybe ill get some feedback this time that would be FANTASTISCH

thanks guys

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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by Sypher » Wed Aug 24, 2011 11:09 pm

I like it

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vCookie
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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by vCookie » Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:01 am

i can see how you want this to be dark. but it feels off. it needs work in my opinion.

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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by gerbertgold » Thu Aug 25, 2011 9:27 am

@sypher
cool thx ;)

@vcookie
not rlly going for "dark" more like if some knights entered a dragons lair and he's just one fuNKytown lizard.
but if u were to change something what would that be?
thx for the feedback

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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by Bad Attitude » Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:01 pm

Alright man, like the track man.
I can se what cookie means by dark, it is a bit dark with the deep, growly bass with the synths.
I'd say it sounds hopefull, which is what you were kind of going for.
A little more variation on the bass would be nice, but except from that I like the track a bunch.
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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by gerbertgold » Thu Aug 25, 2011 4:16 pm

Bad Attitude wrote:Alright man, like the track man.
I can se what cookie means by dark, it is a bit dark with the deep, growly bass with the synths.
I'd say it sounds hopefull, which is what you were kind of going for.
A little more variation on the bass would be nice, but except from that I like the track a bunch.
ya i totally see what ur sayen. i should have changed the bassline up a bit, it kinda repeats the same 2bars over n over with varying highs, i tend to get a little impatient def need to work on that. thx for the feedback dude :4:

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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by vCookie » Thu Aug 25, 2011 10:55 pm

i think the chorus vocal sound should fade out as the first drop comes and fade back in at the drop and stay throughout that entire first drop. change up the bass like the other dude said also. i like though. do some more work and it'll be in my iTunes.

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Re: Gerbertgold - Here Be Dragons

Post by gerbertgold » Sun Aug 28, 2011 5:51 pm

vCookie wrote:i think the chorus vocal sound should fade out as the first drop comes and fade back in at the drop and stay throughout that entire first drop. change up the bass like the other dude said also. i like though. do some more work and it'll be in my iTunes.
word. i see what ur sayen about the chorus and bass and shit makes total sense. thx for the feedback

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