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maybe ill get some feedback this time that would be FANTASTISCH

thanks guys

I like it

i can see how you want this to be dark. but it feels off. it needs work in my opinion.

@sypher
cool thx

@vcookie
not rlly going for "dark" more like if some knights entered a dragons lair and he's just one fuNKytown lizard.
but if u were to change something what would that be?
thx for the feedback

Alright man, like the track man.
I can se what cookie means by dark, it is a bit dark with the deep, growly bass with the synths.
I'd say it sounds hopefull, which is what you were kind of going for.
A little more variation on the bass would be nice, but except from that I like the track a bunch.

Bad Attitude wrote:Alright man, like the track man.
I can se what cookie means by dark, it is a bit dark with the deep, growly bass with the synths.
I'd say it sounds hopefull, which is what you were kind of going for.
A little more variation on the bass would be nice, but except from that I like the track a bunch.

ya i totally see what ur sayen. i should have changed the bassline up a bit, it kinda repeats the same 2bars over n over with varying highs, i tend to get a little impatient def need to work on that. thx for the feedback dude

i think the chorus vocal sound should fade out as the first drop comes and fade back in at the drop and stay throughout that entire first drop. change up the bass like the other dude said also. i like though. do some more work and it'll be in my iTunes.

vCookie wrote:i think the chorus vocal sound should fade out as the first drop comes and fade back in at the drop and stay throughout that entire first drop. change up the bass like the other dude said also. i like though. do some more work and it'll be in my iTunes.

word. i see what ur sayen about the chorus and bass and shit makes total sense. thx for the feedback