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Maybe try getting the kick loud and punchy in the mix. It's sitting quite distant in the mix. there's a high hat a bit loud in the mix for me.

The sounds are good, but they aren't really gelling together. Man, this is something I struggle with too but if it ain't right, everything sounds stuck together rather than moulded.

Finally, it's a bit random for me. It's debatable whether this sort of music should be "musical" but I guess the most important thing should be some sort of "hook" to being people in. That could be rhythmical or melodic.

It is however, loud and bright overall so that is always a good basis to work from!