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Bobtales - Azza
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:48 pm
by chazzzza
Soundcloud
comments would be nice.
Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 7:00 pm
by OllieScott
i suggest learning some music theory, learn some scales, chords etc. Definitely will help improve your music
Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 10:34 pm
by TheTomster
OllieScott wrote:i suggest learning some music theory, learn some scales, chords etc. Definitely will help improve your music
This. None of those notes flow together to be honest. You're sound seems to be nice and clean, so I'd suggest just revising your note arrangement.
Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 10:36 pm
by DazeL
Not gonna lie this song kind of bored me it seemed very repetitive, in your defense though I like the pop style of song construction (with catchy riffs and drops). Not bad for your first song though, might just want to work on the balancing, like that sound at 0:30 could stand be a little softer, as well as the piano, they seem to just pop out there, as opposed to blending with the song. Also, the piano part could use a little reverb I'd say, keep up the good work though hope you enjoy making music I still remember my first song!
Re: first song no idea what to name it but here it is
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 11:13 pm
by paradigm001
might wanna learn some music theory like someone said. The synth that comes in is really harsh too. But the piano is out of tune!
Keep it up though. Definitelly learn your keys and scales though. I say that with the utmost respect. Music comes first and your notes are clashing.
Re: Bobtales - Azza
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 6:14 am
by wub