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Let me know what you think. Needs an intro and a part after. The middle of the song isn't gonna be there. It's just part of a f around I did with another song.

I used FL Studio 10 to create this. I'm learning Ableton Live. I got Cubase 5 for the rock/rap I do.

EDIT: 10/14/2011
I need constructive criticism on what needs to be better etc. Only the first "riff" section whatever is gonna be there permanent. The upbeat part after isn't gonna be there. I put that there so I could play the beginning part again without it being annoying.

I'm not good but hoping to get better.
I don't give a fuck if you don't like skrillex. Most of you guys probably like Benga Caspa Zomby old school ish and compare your tracks to them right? Stop giving me shit for it. Go rant somewhere else.

P.S Audio is better on youtube when you change it from (240p,360p,480p) to 720p. And it doesn't make a difference from 720p-1080p. So stop trying to be smartass about that when it does change the audio quality as it does with the resolution on YOUTUBE.


Don't need to be an ass. If I read it right it says dubstepforum. I hope I'm in the right place.

Bump

to be honest with you mate, your not gunna get a lot of love round here if you're just ripping off 'that emo girl', if anything most people on this forum have a great deal of animosity towards 'that emo girl'

just a heads up

particle-jim wrote:to be honest with you mate, your not gunna get a lot of love round here if you're just ripping off 'that emo girl', if anything most people on this forum have a great deal of animosity towards 'that emo girl'

just a heads up

I'm not even trying to copy skrillex. This is what comes out when I make music. I just wrote that as the title cuz it kind of sounds like him. And people like him so I wrote that as the title so people click it. Pretty much it.

Fuck that was atrocious.

DolphinDiver wrote:Fuck that was atrocious.

Haha thanks

On a more constructive note, the sound is kind of muffled, not sure if thats the right term. I don't know if EQ'ing it would be what you need to do, as I'm new to producing, but just a cleaner, more crisp sound is what you want. Just keep working at it though!

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote:people like him

Not round here they don't

Blinks wrote:On a more constructive note, the sound is kind of muffled, not sure if thats the right term. I don't know if EQ'ing it would be what you need to do, as I'm new to producing, but just a cleaner, more crisp sound is what you want. Just keep working at it though!

Yes it does sound muffled! It's more clear in 720p though. I'm trying to perfect the sound quality with EQ'ing and junk. Then I'm gonna do the other parts of it.

I think that emo girl is a very talented artist. Haters gonna hate. But I think with this track you just had too much going on.

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote:

particle-jim wrote:to be honest with you mate, your not gunna get a lot of love round here if you're just ripping off 'that emo girl', if anything most people on this forum have a great deal of animosity towards 'that emo girl'

just a heads up

I'm not even trying to copy skrillex. This is what comes out when I make music. I just wrote that as the title cuz it kind of sounds like him. And people like him so I wrote that as the title so people click it. Pretty much it.

Theres a difference from saying "This is what comes out when I make music" and "Skrillex Wannabe" like the title says..

i dont think its anything like skrillex. anyway not rly feelin.

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote: It's more clear in 720p though.

720p is a video resolution; this is an audio track.

well my tshirts always sound better at 320 pixels or above so that might be true wub but anyway op if your printing in hi def can i get that tune on a fitted

link is broken! just random noise.

Dosva wrote:

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote:

particle-jim wrote:to be honest with you mate, your not gunna get a lot of love round here if you're just ripping off 'that emo girl', if anything most people on this forum have a great deal of animosity towards 'that emo girl'

just a heads up

I'm not even trying to copy skrillex. This is what comes out when I make music. I just wrote that as the title cuz it kind of sounds like him. And people like him so I wrote that as the title so people click it. Pretty much it.

Theres a difference from saying "This is what comes out when I make music" and "Skrillex Wannabe" like the title says..

Well the title on threads catches peoples attention. And I made this and thought this kind of sounded like skrillex. So instead of not putting "Skrillex Wannabe" in there I did because I knew I was gonna get shit for sounding like him anyway. So I practically dissed myself but the point is I want some criticism not hate.

wub wrote:

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote: It's more clear in 720p though.

720p is a video resolution; this is an audio track.

Don't you know that audio tracks are higher quality on youtube when you change it from 240p to 720p? 360p compared to 720p? Are you deaf?

as if quality would make a difference here

vulvavibration wrote:as if quality would make a difference here

Lol you assholes. Let me hear what you guys make then. Giving me too much shit... :l

Meh...it's alright. Way too chaotic for me; there are just too many random noises flying through the air. Some of the wobbles aren't timed correctly too. I hear them being cut on the rise. I do like the deadmau5-style lazy track title though...

I would recommend you use Soundcloud for uploading your stuff and sharing them.

I also want to add that this is a forum. In a forum, you have to expect all kinds of people to be reviewing your track; haters or not. If you tell any person to rant elsewhere, you will most likely only get negative reviews, if any at all.

wub wrote:

daeMTHAFKNkim wrote: It's more clear in 720p though.

720p is a video resolution; this is an audio track.

That is true, but the sound quality also changes upon swap.

If you take a look at the chart in the link below, you will see what the bitrates are per video resolution on YouTube.
http://www.h3xed.com/web-and-internet/y ... 720p-1080p