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Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 12:49 am
by robwobwob
Soundcloud

I made this track this the first track i made i really like, but i would like your opionins and feedback.

Re: the swarm

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 1:18 am
by Anakratis
Nice sounds!

Let me start rant mode: the hihats at the beginning are a little bit cheesy IMO; your mixdown is clipping at times; your song is a type where the wobbles take control of the sound, and they get a little repetitive, so I would variate those more; needs more synth; needs a breakdown/slow moment.

Overall, you got the wobble concept down, but there are some changes that could be made to make it sounds better. :)

Keep at it!

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:29 pm
by robwobwob
thnx man i gonna edit it soon and post it i think your right about the wobble i gonna try to get it more variated i will post it asp. i have an qeustion tho does anyone maybe have some tips about how i can my wobble more proggesive ?

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:53 pm
by JAWSOME
nice one man, your definitely on the right road with this one, the ratio's on the bass at 1:44 kind of put me off tho.. the drums could use a little improvement but other then that man you got a nice track here.. try be carefull when adding distortions to your bass aswell, (not sure if thats what you have done here) but it is a little distorted in some parts..

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:09 pm
by robwobwob
ye i did @ the bitcrusher to the bass soo it has some drive you think its to much ?

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 3:56 pm
by robwobwob
Soundcloud so ive edited it think its a big improvement but what do you guys think ?

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:02 pm
by Shaion
I'd suggest editing any updates into the first post as well.

Now the track itself sounds pretty good. Though loosen up a bit on that bitcrusher still.

Definitely on the right track though. Keep it up!

Re: Edsteppa - the swarm

Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 11:36 am
by robwobwob
next time i wil update it in the first post. and thnx for your opinion.