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kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:42 am
by kiene
hi
Soundcloud
'ppreciate some feedback on this one!!!
thanks all and ill feedback back if you want
TURN YOUR SPEAKERS UP
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:34 am
by Tino_Be_Like
Its koo nice dub mix... sounds like something you'd hear on an anime about wolves stalking a blood thirsty raven in the woods lol
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:06 pm
by DJ Sampletank
Tino_Be_Like wrote:Its koo nice dub mix... sounds like something you'd hear on an anime about wolves stalking a blood thirsty raven in the woods lol
Does have a bit of an anime feel.
Yeah man really liked this track, except the intro seems a little dragged out, could be shorter. Sampling is bang on and in the right place, which adds to the atmosphere. And I love the atmosphere created in this track.
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:58 pm
by kiene
hey dj sampletank
took that into consideration and shortened the intro and boosted the volume a little bit
some minor tweaking was done
new version is in first post
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 4:04 pm
by ZimmermanStudios
Really good reverb here. The main riff starts to feel a little empty about halfway through it, maybe use some more automation to keep it interesting. This is worlds ahead of most of the stuff on this forum though, good vibes.
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:35 pm
by kiene
ZimmermanStudios wrote:Really good reverb here. The main riff starts to feel a little empty about halfway through it, maybe use some more automation to keep it interesting. This is worlds ahead of most of the stuff on this forum though, good vibes.
i appreciate the kind words
are you talking about the oscillating sub or the occasional low pass reese?
i kept sub the same to really push that minimal feeling but i'll definitely consider changing it up for future tracks
love the feedback and if you got anything you want commented on or feedback just lemme kno!
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:15 pm
by kiene
anyone else? im really likin this style probably gonna amp it up for the next work tho
moar feedback plox
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 4:17 pm
by DJ Sampletank
Yeah dude thats nice, intro's just long enough. Really like this track.
And if your giving out free feedback, then feel free to hit up my soundcloud:
http://soundcloud.com/dj-sampletank 
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:28 am
by kiene
DJ Sampletank wrote:Yeah dude thats nice, intro's just long enough. Really like this track.
And if your giving out free feedback, then feel free to hit up my soundcloud:
http://soundcloud.com/dj-sampletank
thanks man
yeah dude i checked out the first 2 on yours
i want to help you out so here's my advice plain and simple: start getting creative with your synthesis and drums. start layering in some sub bass especially if youre going to label it as dubstep. you NEED that sub somewhere man and the track seems light without it. there are so many good threads in the production forum that could make your stuff sound better even if you only read a couple. it's a great place
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 1:49 am
by stranger_sounds
Very good production, i like it - especially the percussion some nice sounds there. You got the atmosphere sorted.
As far as suggestions go, I think it gets a bit boring after the second drop, it would benefit from something new being added in around here. Maybe some subtle pads or synth stabs. I like the pad you bring in towards the end at about the 5 minute mark, maybe bring it in sooner.
Nice style anyway, I'm just starting to produce more of this kind of thing myself!
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 2:27 am
by kiene
stranger_sounds wrote:Very good production, i like it - especially the percussion some nice sounds there. You got the atmosphere sorted.
As far as suggestions go, I think it gets a bit boring after the second drop, it would benefit from something new being added in around here. Maybe some subtle pads or synth stabs. I like the pad you bring in towards the end at about the 5 minute mark, maybe bring it in sooner.
Nice style anyway, I'm just starting to produce more of this kind of thing myself!
yes ive been getting "it's boring" a lot
definitely going to take this down and change some shit
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 10:34 am
by particle-jim
really diggin this one man, that sub is tasty
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2011 8:41 pm
by brasco
particle-jim wrote:really diggin this one man, that sub is tasty
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 1:53 am
by knobgoblin
I really like this track. I bet it sounds godly on a huge sound system. I does feel like the first half is a bit drawn out, like it could use more variations or possibly just another subdued background texture to help keep the suspense high until the drop. Mix is really nice, quiet, but thats not a bad thing for this style at all.
Re: kiene - wolf's lair (dark, dungeon dubstep)
Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:17 pm
by Liquistik
Good vibes man, loving them sounds!
Check out mine if y'have time. It's minimal dark, my first try and minimal dubstep. See what y'think
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Cheers,
Aaron.