Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

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Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by kawook » Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:39 pm

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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by neonriddims » Sat Oct 22, 2011 4:14 pm

Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by DJ Sampletank » Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:26 pm

neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Yeah, a bit more variation, maybe some modulation on the bass, another synth, something like that. Apart from that, the atmosphere is bang on, deep and dark. Really enjoyed the intro part, would like to hear that again, maybe more upbeat. Nice work so far dude.

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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by Lectric » Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:12 am

well slap my ass and call me sally. this is a tune.
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by KillerKat » Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:21 am

Subtle yet so heavy
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by particle-jim » Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:27 pm

dark and dangerous
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by KoenDercksen » Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:46 pm

GREAT JOB! Heavy as fuck and still dungeon, very good. I love it man!
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by kawook » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:36 pm

neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Cheers for the positive feedback. I took into account what you said and have now posted the full version on the forum check it out I'm sure you see the improvement
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by kawook » Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:38 pm

DJ Sampletank wrote:
neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Yeah, a bit more variation, maybe some modulation on the bass, another synth, something like that. Apart from that, the atmosphere is bang on, deep and dark. Really enjoyed the intro part, would like to hear that again, maybe more upbeat. Nice work so far dude.
Thanks for your feedback check out the full version its got some more stuff to fill it out and mastered as far as i can do it.

To everyone else cheers for the feedback check out the full version there is a 320 available to anyone that wants it.
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by particle-jim » Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:23 pm

i'll have a 320 off u mate
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Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Post by kawook » Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:56 pm

particle-jim wrote:i'll have a 320 off u mate
Sweet man whats your e-mail address and ill send it over

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