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Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 3:39 pm
by kawook
Soundcloud
Let me know what you think

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 4:14 pm
by neonriddims
Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 7:26 pm
by DJ Sampletank
neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Yeah, a bit more variation, maybe some modulation on the bass, another synth, something like that. Apart from that, the atmosphere is bang on, deep and dark. Really enjoyed the intro part, would like to hear that again, maybe more upbeat. Nice work so far dude.

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:12 am
by Lectric
well slap my ass and call me sally. this is a tune.

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 3:21 am
by KillerKat
Subtle yet so heavy

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 4:27 pm
by particle-jim
dark and dangerous

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 6:46 pm
by KoenDercksen
GREAT JOB! Heavy as fuck and still dungeon, very good. I love it man!

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:36 pm
by kawook
neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Cheers for the positive feedback. I took into account what you said and have now posted the full version on the forum check it out I'm sure you see the improvement
thanks

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 8:38 pm
by kawook
DJ Sampletank wrote:
neonriddims wrote:Loving the atmosphere! Nicely done, you really capture the dungeon sound there. I do feel the track needs some sort of direction and development though. Right now it just lurches along like a headless zombie. (Hope you get what I mean, always hard to explain this kind of thing ;) )
Yeah, a bit more variation, maybe some modulation on the bass, another synth, something like that. Apart from that, the atmosphere is bang on, deep and dark. Really enjoyed the intro part, would like to hear that again, maybe more upbeat. Nice work so far dude.
Thanks for your feedback check out the full version its got some more stuff to fill it out and mastered as far as i can do it.

To everyone else cheers for the feedback check out the full version there is a 320 available to anyone that wants it.
Thanks

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:55 am
by kawook

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:23 pm
by particle-jim
i'll have a 320 off u mate

Re: Kawook - Ophion (deep,dungeon)

Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 7:56 pm
by kawook
particle-jim wrote:i'll have a 320 off u mate
Sweet man whats your e-mail address and ill send it over