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Shtuffe
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by Shtuffe » Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:43 pm
This is a small Dubstep song i've made.
I hope to get some constructive criticism so i can improve
*Version 3 of the song*
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so yeah...listen to it...and tell me what you think

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Shtuffe on Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:37 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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B-Frank
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by B-Frank » Thu Nov 10, 2011 9:46 pm
Hey mate, the sounds are cool but the mix needs a lot of work. The actual bass synth is too loud/distorted and drowns out your drums and as you know drums are a big part of the music. Try using a highpass filter and keep upping the frequencies you are cutting off until you can hear your drums punch through nicely. Also just try turning the gain on bass synth down too.
Try checking out some of the mix down threads in the production forum, they are so helpful.
Abstrakt.
Come check out my fothermucking soundcoud:
Something TOTALLY different. Really enjoyed this badboy and the melodies.
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Shtuffe
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by Shtuffe » Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:08 pm
I edited as good ad i can, though i'm not so good with filters/EQ.
I edited the first post and replaced the old song with the new one.
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Shtuffe
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by Shtuffe » Sat Nov 12, 2011 2:38 pm
Hi again, i've edited the song some more, and added some new stuff.
Please, give me some more constructive criticism.

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Shtuffe
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by Shtuffe » Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:32 pm
Is there anything i can improve with the song? I really want some feedback

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darpy parp
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by darpy parp » Tue Nov 15, 2011 6:14 pm
B-Frank wrote:Hey mate, the sounds are cool but the mix needs a lot of work. The actual bass synth is too loud/distorted and drowns out your drums and as you know drums are a big part of the music. Try using a highpass filter and keep upping the frequencies you are cutting off until you can hear your drums punch through nicely. Also just try turning the gain on bass synth down too.
Try checking out some of the mix down threads in the production forum, they are so helpful.
This is some goooood advice.
heres some of that wobbly techno and them drums those kids seem to be into these days...
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Shtuffe
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by Shtuffe » Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:57 pm
darpy parp wrote:B-Frank wrote:Hey mate, the sounds are cool but the mix needs a lot of work. The actual bass synth is too loud/distorted and drowns out your drums and as you know drums are a big part of the music. Try using a highpass filter and keep upping the frequencies you are cutting off until you can hear your drums punch through nicely. Also just try turning the gain on bass synth down too.
Try checking out some of the mix down threads in the production forum, they are so helpful.
This is some goooood advice.
But i've tryed to edit and follow all advices, though i'm not good at all with EQ, and i like the bass (But i did turn the gain down) :/
Isn't there anything else, or do i just need to change more?
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jarvis89
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by jarvis89 » Wed Nov 16, 2011 5:11 pm
turn down that bass its far too loud!
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