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G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:27 pm
by overture
Hey guys, here's a track i've been working on for the past few days. This is only the rough mix but i'd like to know what you think, what you like/don't like about it and what i could add/remove to improve the track. I will be returning feedback to people who leave me a link to their thread.
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Also if anyone knows of any labels that may want to pick this one up, please let me know! But if not then i will hand out 320s to anyone who asks for one
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Enjoy!
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:53 pm
by Electric_Head
cool track man, really not what I expected from the build-up
nice sub, nice beat.
all good
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 4:58 pm
by overture
Electric_Head wrote:cool track man, really not what I expected from the build-up
nice sub, nice beat.
all good
Thanks man, i appreciate that! I'm gonna check out your track now.
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:32 pm
by mimosa
good unconventional strings. the intro is too long though. sorta anticlimatic. the biuld is generic to me.
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225301
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:54 pm
by overture
Thanks for the feedback, yeah i kinda thought the intro was abit long but i wanted that little break before it drops, and yeah i'm not that great at intros it's usually the last thing i do and gets rushed so i will definatly work on that. Gonna check yours out now.
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:35 pm
by sobie
this is beautiful man, the subbass is wicked powerful, and your drums sound so clean.. i'd say develop the intro some more like mimosa had said.
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225508
^ i just posted a final version of a tune here
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:06 pm
by ReachZenith
The track is great man, really enjoy the tom work that you have in there!
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:43 pm
by overture
Thanks man! I really appreciate it, i'm gonna go back into it 2morow and fix up that intro
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:44 pm
by overture
ReachZenith wrote:The track is great man, really enjoy the tom work that you have in there!
Thanks mate! I really wasn't sure about that tom roll at first but then i really got to like it so i kept it in there.
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 3:40 am
by overture
Anyone else ?
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:10 pm
by overture
Bump...anymore feedback guys ?
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 4:42 pm
by fiveone
sounds great... pretty chillin'/vibin' > i reckon the ambiance should be kept to a minimum during the verses and kept for the build-ups to the drop. maybe a darker/deeper synth would be cool? sounds pretty solid though still. big!
fb4fb? viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225693
Re: G1-3 - Mind's Eye (Deep/Minimal) F4F
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 5:38 pm
by overture
oner_music wrote:sounds great... pretty chillin'/vibin' > i reckon the ambiance should be kept to a minimum during the verses and kept for the build-ups to the drop. maybe a darker/deeper synth would be cool? sounds pretty solid though still. big!
fb4fb? viewtopic.php?f=23&t=225693
Thanks man, thinking of adding another synth in there to keep it more interesting. Just left feedback on your thread now aswell.