Please help me for my first track !!

[veuch]

Hello everybody

i'm a new french dub beginner and made a first very simple track there :

http://veush.free.fr/1er_essai.mp3

i'm looking for some technical advices to improv these track and the mix. I know that i've still a lot of work on it !!

Thanks a lot

Veuch

[veuch]

nobody want to help me ??

[krio]

You can read the "production bible" in Production forum here...

I myself can say:
The tune was cool n freaky, and like reggaeish..

-Turn up to volume, get it mastered (look for some vst plugins)
-If i would make Dubstep, i would turn up the bass, but that's entierly producers own decision which style to make..
-I'd try to make a "head-nodder" track, not a dance one, but again, entierly up to you...
-Usually snare should have higher volume than beats..

Best way to get some hints, is to listen to some other tracks..
Some noticeable artists:
Loefah, Skream, Mala, Kromestar, Coki, Hatcha, Cluekid, Benga, Kode 9, Digital Mystikz and much more...
Chemical Records