Nice man, just keep practicing, thats the most important thing ^^
What i forgot yesterday: your drums need a lot more punch, they are also not loud enough, the drums schould always have the highest peak.
Also try layering the drums, especially for kickdrums and snares.
That basically means if you want to have a nice and punchy snare, get a nice snare sample and layer it with a clap and maybe with a little bit of white noise.
This makes your drumsounds more intens, they will cut through the mix muxh better.
Also instead of sidechain or heavy compression, try Equalizing to avoid that different instruments clash.
For example the main punch of a snare drum lies around 250 Hz. you wanna turn this section lightly down on your wubs, so they dont cover your snare.
PS: whats this intro sample of the third track? I mean the guy talking about darkness n stuff
