Dubstepforum.com

got some ideas on things that i want to do to improve this, but would like another take if possible.. cheers

ok so i've updated the file on soundcloud.

i've made quite a few adjustment to this -from what was up before. hope you enjoy.

feedback is really appreciated, and i'll be only to happy to help others out too peace

I like the dark vibes and the sub dominance. For me, I need some mid range freqs in there to change it up. You add some in the second section and for me, that's where the track really shines. Atmosphere is well done, but I think you could utilize the stereo field to showcase the drum work you do in the second section. The song develops into a nice groove by the end of the track, I kinda wished it was there in the first section.

hmm, yea, maybe. i might try and busy it up early and see what it does to the flow of the track. initially i didn't want to show my whole hand, and introduce more further on into the track.

thanks for the kind words and honest feedback.

I understand not wanting to show your whole bag of tricks early on, but the way it is, I think the section can be shortened. I don't know if there is enough novelty to get to that second part...For me of course.

no, i appreciate the extra ears.

it's weird tho aint it? sometimes you can be shot down for shooting your bolt too early and not being able to create any more further excitement, and other times not being able to nail it early on enough to grab someone. try find the balance i guess.

have seen your other comments on other peoples tunes, and your very honest and fair with everyone here. spot on. your a credit to yourself.

Thanks a lot for the compliment polak. I believe in why we're all here. Acting selfish isn't going to push music further. I'll always unconditionally give anyone the time of day, regardless.

this track has a great feel/sound to it, I like the dub style drums, the extra rhythmical element fit perfectly

thanks man..

i've been messin' about with the early part of the track, and think i might have found a solution. i'll upload and replace the file to soundcloud in a few days.