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Reworked Young Pride and Got it sounding stronger, looking for feedback, please let me know what you think..beefed up the kick now and also some of the other sounds,, actually may have pushed it too much but not sure, looking for other opinions pls.. nice one.

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i think your kick needs to be more prominent, theres some good sounds in here though ! nice tune.

nice one bruv, yeh noticed last night, cheers for confirming - I need to get a bit of low frequency back in the kick. cheers mate

any second opinions ?

hell yeah! sounds really good.

i liked it, clean, well produced. just my taste, but i feel it's too long. again, well produced keep it up

Nice one 'The Jaft', really appreciate that mate and glad you like it...

Vocal sample and chord stabs are in different keys. Which may or may not be the intention.

Some great sounding elements for dark dubstep. I'm loving the vibes. Nice and dark.

Your kick has zero bottom end.

Sub is nice and deep. Love that.

The element that comes in every second bar. That would really sound huge if you beefed it up. Copy, octave down, layer it up. Give it some presence.

Damn good work so far. Nice and restrained.

Cheers Elsonido, thats really helpful mate and will get on to getting the track sounding better soon..will take all of what you said here and apply to the tune...nice one !

Right, I have gone back and beefed up the tune, looking for feedback, think its sounding much better (i REPLACED THE FIRST POST)

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bmping again, tune sounding much better in my opinion...hope to get some more ideas/feedback....anythin g missing ?

Have just made it available for free DL, please leave comment if you decide to Download... cheers

serious amount of beefing up required on the kick
it`s virtually non-existent
possibly add a spacey pad over the top?
your wub wub sound can use some doubling and expanding
make it big and dominant

otherwise it`s sounding clear, good ideas

Nice one mate, keep having to go back to the kick, but think just need to turn it up a bit....will also go back and get the wub wub sounding more wide.

cheers

the kick is really lost in the mix
either turn it up but I`d think you may have some eq issues

in general it`s a solid tune, well mixed.
Just the kick really I have a prob with.
the track itself sounds very wide and spacious

cheers mate, really helpful - will have a new version up in the next few days...got it sounding better..