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Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:05 pm
by Harribo
Just finished another one stickin to the deep bass n dark vibes.. hope u all like it, wud be nice to get some feedback aswell. cheers
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Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:21 pm
by GR8
sweet
Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 11:19 am
by wub
Beat feels very empty, like there is some obvious stop start between some of the hits. Like the plinky plonky synth sounds though, good amount of processing on them to let them really cut through things. Bass sound is nice, loving that long attack to give the feel of really sucking itself into the mix. Felt the beat programming could do with some changeup towards the end of the tune.
Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 12:07 pm
by Electric_Head
Nice ideas in the track.
The percussion elements need to be jelled together more to prevent the stop start feel.
I think the snare is out of place in the mix.
The reverb is different to the rest of the track.
Try to push it back a bit more.
The other elements work very well with the motive of the track.
The snare just becomes annoying because of the way it sounds in the mix, too pronounced.
3:12 on - the synth sweep sounds really nice, I like the way it glitches.
Definitely change the beat slightly in the 2nd half of the track.
Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 1:53 pm
by drokkr
That thin snare almost sits away from the rest of the mix. Layering is the key to sorting that out. I'd like to hear more edits on the drums too. Bass sound is nice but again I'd like to hear that switched up a bit and those little zaps work well under everything. Good ideas here.
Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:16 pm
by RILLADUBZ
Harribo wrote:Just finished another one stickin to the deep bass n dark vibes.. hope u all like it, wud be nice to get some feedback aswell. cheers
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Lakota_Mcr
Hey, Bruv! Nice tune. Minimal dark dub! Big fan! Keep the work up. I wouldn't have changed much on the track. Only difference I would make is adding a bigger reverb to your snare. I probably would have chosen a reverberated clap so it would sit with the mix well and some percs. Other than that I think the track is very solid. Big up!
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Re: Lakota - Underworld - Free download - Deep bass
Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2012 2:57 pm
by Harribo
Thanks for the advice guys now that uve said it i can notice it alot more didnt think the snare was that out of fit n not in place.
Gna make sure i dont do that for the next one.
I appreciate the construtive critisim gna take everything u guys have said and incorporate it on my next track.
Cheers