System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

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System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

Post by vSquared » Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:28 pm

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Edit: sorry for the broken link - fixed again!
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Re: System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

Post by Shaion » Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:44 pm

Yup. Sounds amazing. Very clear mix, great flow and really diggin' the work on the vocals there.
There's this one hat sample that sounds really dry in contrast to the others, but that's not too annoying either. xD

Really great job, man. Big ups.
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Re: System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

Post by TragicTravisty » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:29 pm

I like it allot. The vocals are a bit back in the mix, more than usual with dubstep vocals, but I like it that way. It puts an emphasis on the instrumental portion.
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Re: System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

Post by KoenDercksen » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:13 pm

Like this, you create a good space in the track with the vocals. I feel that the snare would be awesome with some more tail on it.

The minimal instrumentation works great like this :) The kick sounds a bit weak though when I'm just listening to it, but I suppose it works.
The ride you have on every 1 and 3 is a bit.. dry? Something, I don't really know... Feels out of place or something.

Great job anyway, just some little tweaks and stuff would make it spot on!
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Re: System - Lights (vSQUARED Remix)

Post by vSquared » Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:29 pm

Thanks for the good feedback guys! I've now posted V6 (haha) of the track and I've definitely fixed a few things including dry percussion and also I've brightened up the kick :)
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