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Post by invictus » Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:53 pm

Hey guys
I really need some professional feedback on this one. I need to know what doesn't sound good and what should I work on.

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Post by Shaion » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:04 pm

The kick is very weak. It just gets flushed away by the very flowing soundscape. Along that, the snare could be brought out a little bit more and definitely add some more weight to the bass. It's a good track overall, but.... I'm just not "feeling" it. It needs more energy.
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Post by KoenDercksen » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:17 pm

Definitely work on the drums. That kick needs a shitload more weight :D Actually let me rephrase, the whole track needs more bassweight in general. You've got something cool going, just keep working on it! Maybe try finding another kick sample?
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