Page 1 of 1
Invictus - Collapse
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:53 pm
by invictus
Hey guys
I really need some professional feedback on this one. I need to know what doesn't sound good and what should I work on.
Soundcloud
Thanks in advance!

Re: Invictus - Collapse
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:04 pm
by Shaion
The kick is very weak. It just gets flushed away by the very flowing soundscape. Along that, the snare could be brought out a little bit more and definitely add some more weight to the bass. It's a good track overall, but.... I'm just not "feeling" it. It needs more energy.
Re: Invictus - Collapse
Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:17 pm
by KoenDercksen
Definitely work on the drums. That kick needs a shitload more weight

Actually let me rephrase, the whole track needs more bassweight in general. You've got something cool going, just keep working on it! Maybe try finding another kick sample?