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Invictus - Collapse

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:53 pm
by invictus
Hey guys
I really need some professional feedback on this one. I need to know what doesn't sound good and what should I work on.

Soundcloud

Thanks in advance! :)

Re: Invictus - Collapse

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:04 pm
by Shaion
The kick is very weak. It just gets flushed away by the very flowing soundscape. Along that, the snare could be brought out a little bit more and definitely add some more weight to the bass. It's a good track overall, but.... I'm just not "feeling" it. It needs more energy.

Re: Invictus - Collapse

Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:17 pm
by KoenDercksen
Definitely work on the drums. That kick needs a shitload more weight :D Actually let me rephrase, the whole track needs more bassweight in general. You've got something cool going, just keep working on it! Maybe try finding another kick sample?