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Took a break from making hip hop for a while then made this...lets just say i'm dubbin again lol

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your kick is drowning out the wobble synth, maybe go easier on the sidechaining, the snareclap is not really prominent, id' suggest bringing it forward, the breakdown isn't in tune with the intro. liking the whole pulp fiction idea but the sample sounds a little dry. i love the wonky drum arrangement that sounds like its a tad off beat. also notice how the intro is louder than the breakdown? maybe you want some headroom in the intro to give the track space to breathe. nice work on the sample in the intro btw. i'd also suggest some more variation, drum fills, wobble fills, using more synth patches would maybe make it a lot bigger. if you'd like to return feed : http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=238989

Thanks for the critique man - first off - your song is awesome man, downloaded it actually, really dig it.

There's actually no sidechaining going on at all, the kick you were talking about is just really subby and I even lowered the gain but still seems to bleed over the synth.

As far as the breakdown not being in tune with the intro...what do you mean??? The patterns are literally exactly the same and the two samples are from the same clip...lol.

Everything else I will take into consideration when fixing it up. Thanks man.

MZmRiZd wrote:Thanks for the critique man - first off - your song is awesome man, downloaded it actually, really dig it.
As far as the breakdown not being in tune with the intro...what do you mean??? The patterns are literally exactly the same and the two samples are from the same clip...lol.

i meant harmonically your wobble patch seems to be at +4 semitones (maybe +6) over the root note of your chords- maybe that's intentional, i find it distracting from the rather chill feel of the intro though.