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antonsuperstar
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- Joined: Sun Mar 25, 2012 1:43 pm
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by antonsuperstar » Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:56 am
Hey people,
I'm currently signed to a label and thinking of writing an album with songs related to the part of the city I live in. It's kind of a dubby tune, hopefully with some atmosphere that you'll like
. I would like to hear your thoughts on it.
the track means alot to me, so don't be to harsch..
thanks!
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Riddles
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- Joined: Wed Jan 12, 2011 10:44 am
- Location: Brighton
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by Riddles » Tue Mar 27, 2012 1:22 pm
is the percussion supposed to be off beat ion the first half? it sounds really disjointed and doesn't flow because of it. i like the intro but i think you need to change up the tune a bit as it progresses, it does a bit but i dont think enough and gets a bit repetitive. Also the kick snare percussion is very dull, try making the percussion a bit more complex. i can see the ideas and they arent bad but needs some work imo
soronery wrote:Too easy to sit behind a keyboard with a playlist of dubstep tunes on, arguing about the defintion of a word in relation to a sound.
All that melts away when the lights are down and the bass is up.
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klassik
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by klassik » Tue Mar 27, 2012 6:02 pm
this is pretty tite honestly just arange the song a little bit better and you should add a heavy sub bass and heavy high hats .Have you tried equing things a little.It would help .Check out my tracks and tell me what you think
http://soundcloud.com/kevin-ruiz
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