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Hey people,

I'm currently signed to a label and thinking of writing an album with songs related to the part of the city I live in. It's kind of a dubby tune, hopefully with some atmosphere that you'll like . I would like to hear your thoughts on it.

the track means alot to me, so don't be to harsch..

thanks!

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is the percussion supposed to be off beat ion the first half? it sounds really disjointed and doesn't flow because of it. i like the intro but i think you need to change up the tune a bit as it progresses, it does a bit but i dont think enough and gets a bit repetitive. Also the kick snare percussion is very dull, try making the percussion a bit more complex. i can see the ideas and they arent bad but needs some work imo

thanx man. I'll work on the drums and the progression.

this is pretty tite honestly just arange the song a little bit better and you should add a heavy sub bass and heavy high hats .Have you tried equing things a little.It would help .Check out my tracks and tell me what you think
http://soundcloud.com/kevin-ruiz