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EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 10:32 am
by EatTheFood
Here's my more Electronica oriented track, still in the Dubstep style.
Need some feedback. Hope you enjoy :)

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Re: EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:17 am
by Maccaveli
Awesome atmosphere and I love the intro, but maybe turn the bass down just a little bit. I had to turn my speakers down cos it sounded like they were gonna blow haha. Also kinda squashes the rest of the track, which is a shame cos there's some awesome sounds in there.

Re: EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:33 am
by EatTheFood
Maccaveli wrote:maybe turn the bass down just a little bit. I had to turn my speakers down cos it sounded like they were gonna blow haha.
Yes, I was thinking of turning them down a little :lol:
But still thanks for the advice :W:
I uploaded it like that 'cause my speakers are kinda shitty and don't have a real good sound :(

Otherwise what do you think about the general composition and construction of the track ?

Re: EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 6:59 am
by DemonShift
I think the composition is great! Everything seems to be in just the right spots to keep it interesting! :D

Re: EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 8:19 am
by Maccaveli
It's simple but effective, very good work. Couldn't hurt to add a bit more variation in those booms, like maybe a few bits where they hit twice in the space one would normally hit, you know? While I've got you, mind checking out my newest track? :6:
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=241839

Re: EatTheFood - End Of Time (Dark / Electronica / Dubstep)

Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2012 9:50 am
by AirFee
I love what the bass is doing, so dark :) You could try pictching the bass boom so it has a litttle movement, but not too much cos it might remove from the ambience