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Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:00 am

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Deep tune of mine. If you like the way it sounds on Soundcloud, you'll love the free 320.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by DJ Higgumz » Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:02 am

i think i sharted!

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:03 am

Glad you like it, man!
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by jeanblanc » Sat Apr 21, 2012 8:50 am

Really good, would like to have heard it on something better than my headphones but definitely thought the bass and drums worked really well. You could maybe throw in a few surprises by upping the tempo of the drums with some different/extra percussion at some point, but overall is cool.

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Sat Apr 21, 2012 3:51 pm

Thanks! And yeah, Soundcloud kinda ruins the quality of lower frequencies.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by olly » Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:33 pm

i do like it but its maybe a bit repetitive after a bit. you should add something different every now and then to keep it interesting. good work tho

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by Sampletank » Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:55 pm

Alright man this is nice. The high, hollow effect every few bars makes it for me, and I love the snare.

I agree with jeanblanc and olly, a little more changes on the percussion at parts would make it better, not that its not real nice already, because it is noice.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:16 pm

I'll be sure to make some changes and repost it.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by Shum » Tue Apr 24, 2012 2:52 am

there's a shell of a good idea here.
need to fix up the bongos, i would suggest replacing them altogether but if you don't want to do that then pitching them up or hi-pass filter (don't go too crazy with it though) plus some decent compression will get them standing out in your mix a bit more.
some mid-range bass playing along with your sub (a la Distance) would be nice, if only to spice it up a little bit.

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:07 am

Thanks for the input. I'm actually working on it right now and I'll be sure to post it again when I've made some changes.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by person » Tue Apr 24, 2012 3:46 am

The heavy sub and the drums work well together. For some reason I want to hear bongos in it. I am going to agree with everyone else with adding some change ups. Great job over all.

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Tue Apr 24, 2012 11:13 pm

Thanks man! The bongos are in there, but they're pretty low and get drowned out a little bit by the sub bass.
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by fiveone » Mon May 14, 2012 7:17 pm

loving the track as it is, eyes down!

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Sat May 19, 2012 7:48 pm

Appreciated, man!
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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by FablePng » Sun May 20, 2012 3:44 pm

Really enjoyed this, big up mate.

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Re: Menjaben - Hour Dub [Deep]

Post by menjaben » Tue May 22, 2012 2:50 am

To you too!
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