New track_looking for some feedback plz

[Meeks]

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[Ikor]

1:21 - 1:24 - that is a one sick start wich makes the follow up 1:27 sound sortof weak but damn thats my favorite part, realy sick tune btw ) what u could do at 1:38 - is change the sound of the oscilator, make it different but sort of recognizable from the previous one, also the background synth- i hear it too often so try cuttin it at some parts- should make the tune sound more variable. the drop at 3:56 doesnt feel like a drop :p maybe its because of the dude speakin idk, either way the easiest way to fix it is to add a reversed crash before the drop, and a crash at the drop itself i guesse. 3:56 melody sequel is niiize but i would realy expect a fatter baseline there, thats just me but i definitly like the tune man, keep it up

[Meeks]

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[Meeks]

[quote="Meeks"]First of all, thanx for the kind words dude. Also are u referring to the synth that is is alone with the strings at 5:04, and i think your right about 1:38 some variation would be good, and oh yeah drops seem to be a continuing problem for me. I want them them to just shatter peoples minds, but that has yet to be the case. As for the baseline at the end, do u mean fatten it up as in make a new baseline or to just thicken up the sound. I'm glad u liked the tune man, this is only my third finished track so it definitely gives me motivation to keep pushin forward.
Also any thoughts on the mixing and mastering on this one does it sound over compressed on any thing like that to u?

[Ikor]

no no, the 5:04 can't be touched, its good m8 leave it, by synth i meant the melody playback wich lasts like the whole song: like 0:00-1:11 is a really nice piece of melody but it'd be good to stop the melody at 1:11 and go with bass alone, then find a spot to return to that melody again, see my point? about the drop at 3:56, what i mean by fatter is where u get creative, just feels like that last part has to be sth big. my advice for you now is to experiment, learn, discover: figure what can be done with drums oscilators synths and try 2 developpe a style

[Descended]

I don't like the melody. But nice bass patches