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First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:02 pm
by neoalchemist
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:45 pm
by neoalchemist
Someone give me some opinions or feedback please, I need motivation and some tips.
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:47 pm
by CVRS
Loove the build up to the last chorus, that's sick. Have you thought about putting some leads on the track?
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 1:55 pm
by neoalchemist
Ya I've been working on it I just can't get anything that sounds right.
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 9:54 pm
by neoalchemist
Bump
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 11:11 pm
by elyhess
This caught my eye, one of the biggest problems i have with songs, is finishing them! lol
Anyways, i agree with CVRS, a chorus would be really cool! I know it can be hard to add highs when you've got a fluctuating bassline. I've been working on a similar song, and i actually just found some random Acapella from one of Afrojacks songs, and i've incorporated peices and bits of it into my song and it actually sounds really sick! But yeah dude, really sick, raging my sub!
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Fri May 11, 2012 11:30 pm
by neoalchemist
Thanks for the feed back and I'm working on adding more but I'm having a hard putting vocals in it, I can't get it to sound right, I have just been adding different audio effects.
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat May 12, 2012 6:07 am
by Manufacturedsoul
Still needs a little more work like some more synth parts, and analog samples to break it up but i think its a good start for sure!
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat May 12, 2012 4:04 pm
by neoalchemist
Thanks and ill work on that.
Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat May 12, 2012 5:49 pm
by ThirteenNL
Your reece is waaaay too present, try putting it more to back to give your other sounds more presence! That should make it much better

Re: First full song, feedback greatly appreciated
Posted: Sat May 12, 2012 6:12 pm
by neoalchemist
More to back?