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This is going to be my first dungeon tune (3rd tune overall) and I feel like the intro is decent but i'd like opinions from some more experienced producers.
Also yes I know the percussions are not panned out, I want to get some advice before I move on with the track


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I think the intro goes on for a bit long without much progression, would like some introduction of percussion at around .35 to feel like it is building, perhaps just some subtle swingy-hats
Also the kick and snare just dont sit right to me for a dungeon style track, they sound a bit overly processed as opposed to organic. Would like to have some more sub in that kick as well.

would like to have some more sub in that kick as well.

this. more percussion, drums sound kinda boring. i like the style, very atmospheric - just needs much more depth.

Thanks for the tips. I added a hat loop with an auto pan with a rising modulated volume that peaks at the end of the intro, and swapped the kick for a less hard-hitting more rounder style kick. Sounds a lot better!