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Hi everybody

I'm a beginer in mix and that one of my new project:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7R-Pz0QND3I

Plaese can you say what he will not on my remix?
Thanks for help!

sorry, was problem with youtube licence --
the good link : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cJpPNvGAJAs