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PivotAX
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Traffic - Ridiculous WIP [Deep/Filth]

Post by PivotAX » Mon May 28, 2012 7:53 pm

Hi, I'm a Teenage, Norwegian dubstep artist. I have made music for about 2 years now and I would love your opinions on my music.
Please note that the following is only a WIP(Work in Progress) or "Unfinished" song.
Any feedback as to the bass, synth, drum-beat, pattern, lead, pad or basically anything is helpfull. :)

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Re: Traffic - Ridiculous WIP [Deep/Filth]

Post by wub » Tue May 29, 2012 7:01 am

Opening drum beat is very staccato and a bit stop...start - could do with some other elements around it to carry it forward a bit without making it sound quite so empty. Synth you've got coming in is a bit too high in the mix for my tastes, could do with gradually building up. Hats need some shuffle on their programming, they're got a very loopy feeling to them - maybe write several hat patterns (or add a bit move shuffle movement) and then rotate between them for some variation.

PivotAX
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Re: Traffic - Ridiculous WIP [Deep/Filth]

Post by PivotAX » Tue May 29, 2012 9:43 am

Wow, that's the most perfect feedback! :D
I will get right on it and try my best!
Much appreciated<3
Cheers,
Traffic.

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